Its a bit sloppy, especially by his right eye. His face is made of rocks right? I would assume that would cause the shadows to be a lot sharper. Right under his lower lip you have these 2 sharp highlights that look pretty cool. Try using that type of contrast/ sharpness more. His face has alot of form but his helmet has none. It's a bit jarring. Maybe you should add some color to his helmet. The purple/blue in the bg isnt doing it for me either.
agree with the bg, but what would work better. interesting idea with the contrast.I was just reading some new gods stuff today and he isnt made out of rock it is just rough and crater like, however this is modeled after a future version. when you say the right eye is sloppy do you mean the drawing or inking or coloring or all?
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looks cooler than my last god.
Its a bit sloppy, especially by his right eye. His face is made of rocks right? I would assume that would cause the shadows to be a lot sharper. Right under his lower lip you have these 2 sharp highlights that look pretty cool. Try using that type of contrast/ sharpness more. His face has alot of form but his helmet has none. It's a bit jarring. Maybe you should add some color to his helmet. The purple/blue in the bg isnt doing it for me either.
agree with the bg, but what would work better. interesting idea with the contrast.I was just reading some new gods stuff today and he isnt made out of rock it is just rough and crater like, however this is modeled after a future version. when you say the right eye is sloppy do you mean the drawing or inking or coloring or all?
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